In Week 6 of Term 1 our class focussed on how to write great explanations. We wrote about how to survive your first night in Minecraft (the game a lot of us are obsessed with!).
Here is my writing, after I have self-assessed and peer-assessed my work.
HOW TO SURVIVE YOUR FIRST NIGHT IN MINECRAFT
Have you heard about people talking about Minecraft? If not I am delitly to tell you about it. Minecraft is a popular game in the whole wide world. Nearly everyone plays it, if you're interested playing minecraft here are some steps to how to survive in the first night of minecraft.
Firstly you need to find somewhere you have heaps of resources nearby so you can survive.
When you are done, find where you can build your house than next you need to find wood and tool to build your house. And your house need to be 3 block your higher because if it’s 2 block higher than when you wake up on the bed your head will be on the ceiling.
Secondly you have to find sand then put the sand in the oven then you can build it as your window because you can’t find any glass in minecraft. Now you got everything you may build your 3 block or higher house.
You will be also needing food because in minecraft you always will be hungry but not thirsty. To find food is to kill animals and if you use your sword it will be hard to kill them because it will take long. So the best thing is to have to kill animals is a diamond sword.
You will be also needing food because in minecraft you always will be hungry but not thirsty. To find food is to kill animals and if you use your sword it will be hard to kill them because it will take long. So the best thing is to have to kill animals is a diamond sword.
Have a look out for those mobs which are zombies, skeletons, spiders and endermans. Unfortunately make sure you look out for those creepers, you don't want to meet them.
Now you are done and all sorted. Well done to your hard work.
