[Introduction]
Today’s writing will be about stars because people may not know about stars and they might not know what to write for their topic ( stars ) . Have you ever wondered the different things that is going around with stars? Well to find out information about stars you will need to keep reading as you go.
Different Atoms:
There are different atoms that goes in with stars, 1 is hydrogen that heats up with the second one ( Helium atoms ). There is also 90 natural kinds of atoms. Atoms are the basic building blocks, in matter that make up everyday object. Stars are huge, but it may looks like it’s tiny because we are from long distance where stars are. The star's gravity inside intense that nothing can escape it’s honestly even light. There are stars that comes to matariki that are all sisters.
General Information about stars:
This paragraph begins with information that you might want to find out:
A star begins to born in the center of nebulae.
Most stars, included the sun are main sequence. Nuclear fusion is converted hydrogen and helium atoms. The more these stars get hotter the more bright it goes. Compare when these stars begins to die, they become giant, and supergiant and that is because of their kinds.
Different types of stars:
There are seven main types of stars around the sky. The Order of the stars ( decreasing temperature ) are o,b,a,f,g,k and m. O and B are the stars that are uncommonly but mostly very bright ( that is all I can know ). A star that has eight times a mass of the sun is called a “ blue giant “. A star that has a very hot mass is called a “ white dwarf “. Explain this facts a rigel star is 20, 000 degrees, if 3 times it’s 40, 000 times brighter than the sun.
[Conclusion]
There are 7 main types of different stars. Comparing when stars die it grows as giant it could be as different as humans because when humans die they certainly go into a coffin then go to underground which takes them to go to heaven. Different atoms come to combined making stars. I hope this report gives you as much help about stars on your own inspiration. If you need more information about stars you can go to : http://www.enchantedlearning.com/subjects/astronomy/stars/startypes.shtml.
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